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Doug Sundseth
is 35% done
Interim notes:
POV switches are disrupting, and so far the two main points of view seem entirely unrelated.
Constant use of modern slang and metaphor in dialog takes away from immersion.
Turgid pacing, poor editing, uninteresting world building ...
At the 1/3 point of this book, the only thing keeping me going is other reviews that mention the book gets much better later on. Right now this is one-star.
— Jun 05, 2024 08:57AM
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POV switches are disrupting, and so far the two main points of view seem entirely unrelated.
Constant use of modern slang and metaphor in dialog takes away from immersion.
Turgid pacing, poor editing, uninteresting world building ...
At the 1/3 point of this book, the only thing keeping me going is other reviews that mention the book gets much better later on. Right now this is one-star.
