Status Updates From Embracing His Syn (The Noth...

Going through my third re read and this is still my most fave of the series

TOO MUCH SEX in this story. Skimming like crazy.

He thought by saying he loved him, Syn was PUSHING Fury into a relationship he wasn't ready for, AFTER Syn already said they were boyfriends. MAKE IT MAKE SENSE! I'm so ready for this book to be over with. The next one I really liked, although I remember nothing about it. Here's hoping I still do, because this one sucks.

Syn ran because he thought Fury would be MAD that he said he loved him. HOW FUCKING ILLOGICAL can you write a character to be? Even Fury asked, "Why would that make me mad?" I mean, after everything they've done together and the feelings they've shown to each other, he really thought Fury would be mad just because he just got out of a relationship? That makes no sense.

GOD THESE TWO ARE SO STUPID!!!! I hate this form of writing. It's not endearing to read men acting cowardly about their feelings. It's ANNOYING AS HELL.

The drama around Syn saying he loved Fury is ridiculous. My eyes are rolling so hard, they hurt. FFS, to have Syn run away out of fear because he let it slip he loved Fury is STUPID writing. Then to say he fucked up by saying is even STUPIDER writing. And Fury standing there shocked and speechless that Syn felt that way is even DUMBER since Syn already claimed him as his boyfriend. WTF?

And the, "it's too soon to fall in love" trope is OVERUSED. It doesn't take a lot of time for people to fall in love. It's actually very easy to do when you're attracted to the other person and you're having copious amounts of sex, which these two are. What's hard, is staying in love. Because the high you get from being in love goes away after a few months. I'm so tired of reading authors writing this trope.