Status Updates From Bitten: Dark Erotic Stories

12 - Twincest. And so much placed blame. 0 stars

13- I have nothing to say about this one other than it's not for me. 2 stars.

14- Long and not interesting. 1 stars for some imagination but not sexy.

15- WTF. Ok yes this was DARK and erotic. But whhhyyyyy. I'm very uncomfortable with how the author portrayed all the black men in this story. NO No NO. I can't rate this one.

10/15 - BDSM from a bough girl. I'm not averse to reading it but the language used was not my cup of tea. 2 stars.

11/15 - Ah, some weird stuff finally. Not the best storywise, left allot hanging and was not very interested to know what exactly had happened. Which means a failure of intrigue. But it was ACTUAL dark erotica, so 3 stars.

8/15 Lmao this is one of my fav tropes. 4 stars just because I like the basic idea.

9/15 This is the chauvinistic reversal of the magical virgin trope. Not erotic, but well written. OMG he fell in love and lost his power?! What a sacrifice! Blah. One star.

6/15 Having a witch in the story does not mean your story is dark. Also the narrator sound 10, not 15-16. I felt deeply uncomfortable by how childish the narrator's voice was. Not the voice actress, she's obviously played as an older woman reminiscing, but the actual words feel very young. One star.

7/15 Maybe my def of dark is different because WHY is this here. So he likes dominate partners. One star.

4/15 Why is this here? Its a basic exhibition story, nothing dark or new about it. No stars.

5/15 Basic fanfiction plot. I've read millions of diff variations of this same story. Honestly kinda boring, the last BakuDeku fanfic I read that had the similar empty house and demon/spirit plot was MUCH hotter and darker. This was pretty vanilla in all honesty. Points for clothing that moves! 2 Stars.

3/15 Ehhh... would have made a great first chapter, some sort of mystery you want to know more about, but by itself its just dissatisfying. The whole thing is a mystery, nothing is explained at all, but the mystery itself doesn't even give enough clues to be interesting. There was also no tension at all. Negative stars.

1/15 Eh not sexy, more depressing than anything else. One star.

2/15 Sexy! Gorgeous sensual language, I'm just not a fan of the french revolution and hate reading it romanticized. Both sides were nasty-ugly-rotten and I can't ever feel great about a story involving it. But the intrigue of the rose and the evil seduction made this good. Doesn't help that I loved Camille and this reminded me of it. Three stars.