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Erin
is 12% done
Did this not have an editor? The writing is clunky, and there are some phrases repeated awkwardly for no purpose I can ascertain. Like - two sentences in a row using the same phrasing/description. Like the author came up with a better context for the description and used the same turn of phrase, but forgot to delete the "unused" one.
— Sep 27, 2021 12:40PM
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