Status Updates From The Merchant of Death (Pend...

in medias res final boss (i have no idea what’s happening)

Omg they said the name of the book (half-joking)

Is pendragon the best book you’ll ever read? Not exactly. But is it fun, engaging, and interesting enough to keep you from putting down? Yes.

Having fun but how tf is Bobby writing these letters in real time? He doesn’t have any parchment!
Also how come every person of color is described as looking of African descent. If we’re going for an Africa inspired fantasy world it’s fine, but they just keep saying it…
Then again I’m pretty sure the first toe are the same person, the third might be

I don’t know why, but I kind of want to make a storyboard for this scene. That’s a sign that the story is coming together nciely, even if I prefer the first-person narration. It starts rocky, but it’s getting better!

This is whimsical and all but can the author please learn a synonym for “note.” Yes we get it we can hear music notes but can you describe it in any other way ohhhhh my gosh

Not sure how I feel about this, it’s charming but it has a pretty fast pace without a lot of explanation. I’m hoping that turns around soon

I know the protagonist is a younger teenager, but I feel like the first person narration drops a lot of commas and punctuation? Like there’s a line that’s just “what’s this all about uncle press” with no punctuation telling you where to let yourself breathe. So it’s kind of like all one breath

All I have to say on the intro is that I am so glad I’m not a crush-crazy 14 year old. Because can you imagine taking about kissing your crush instead of the freaking magic journey and you maybe almost dying