Status Updates From Guarding Evelyn

The narrator makes the characters sound like immature juveniles. These are supposed to be mid aged women. The writing doesn’t help either.

Why is the pacing on this so uneven? Feel like I’m being speed run into a poorly developed romance? Or maybe my tastes are bit more refined and everything seems rushed? Arden just seems like she’s getting way ahead of herself. I’m not liking it. I’m not connecting to the characters and I feel like the romance is being forced upon the reader. Not a good look.

Lol wut. How we already discussing hearts and minds? Ma’am. This is a Wendy’s.

Nice first 20%. Quick downer before I return to Samantha Brinkman.

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