Status Updates From The Summer of 1876: Outlaws...

I was excited to read this one but where was the editor when this thing was being written??? It’s all over the place and there’s a baseball game happening back east.
I can’t follow what’s happening. I give up.

So far, it’s a terrible narrative. The author is choppy in his timeline of events. The hopping from one person’s events to the next makes it extremely difficult to keep up with.