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Stephanie Ballew
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This writing is so juvenile that it is really annoying.
The main characters are supposed to be 30f and 38m but talk like they are barely in their 20s with phrases like "doing it". The female narrator has a vocal fry that is really annoying as well.
I don't mind his dom tendencies, but I DO mind his lack of communication skills and lack of consent BEFORE "punishments".
— Feb 24, 2026 09:41PM
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The main characters are supposed to be 30f and 38m but talk like they are barely in their 20s with phrases like "doing it". The female narrator has a vocal fry that is really annoying as well.
I don't mind his dom tendencies, but I DO mind his lack of communication skills and lack of consent BEFORE "punishments".
