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I can't believe how unrealistic all of these characters are. The dialogue is horrible. None of their conversations make any sense, their body language is completely off, their facial expressions described almost completely contradictory to what is being said. I can't understand how anyone can write so badly. I'm just rage-reading it by now.
— Mar 03, 2026 02:59AM
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