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He tapped the folder with a long finger. I snorted loudly and got a strange look from Annika Lorentzon.
“Erik, it doesn’t exactly do you any good to be arrogant in this situation,” she said softly.
"When someone lies blatantly," I smiled angrily.

Wtf literally nothing about this makes any sense.

Her forehead was wrinkled and sad.

....what? Her forehead was sad??

I can't believe how unrealistic all of these characters are. The dialogue is horrible. None of their conversations make any sense, their body language is completely off, their facial expressions described almost completely contradictory to what is being said. I can't understand how anyone can write so badly. I'm just rage-reading it by now.