Status Updates From MetaGame

To chapter 19

Oh... so his motivation to be insanely stupid at all times. Original, I’ll give him that.

Our MC’s motivations don’t make the slightest bit of sense. By which I mean, his actions are contrary to his obvious goals for no stated reason.

This went from interesting to garbage in a chapter. Must say I’m impressed.

“So why not play the idiot?”

Dear, no one thinks you’re playing.

This author needs some Ritalin to stay on point. I’m not interested in figuring out who some random woman, who hasn’t done anything to warrant attention, is, when we’re already in the middle of something else.

Is... is our mc evil? While thinking he’s a good person? This could be good if the author actually plays off that.

The chapter starts with a quote. He killed Fael finally after she was trying to kill him then he starts looking at her corps. He got lots of points for killing her and his friend C was humming in the congregation. The book is getting better and I hope theres more action to come.