Status Updates From BETRAYAL of love and freedom

Can't wait to finish! I could have skipped 100 pages, 381 - 480 something but I didn't. Part one and part three are fast-faced part two not so much. Now I can't wait to see how it all comes together

So far, this book is interesting.

Pt 1 moved quickly, great plot. Pt 2 is plodding and the author's premise that mental health issues need no medicinal intervention is disturbing. May work for the author personally but not for all of us. Forcing my way thru Pt 2 so I can get to Pt 3.

I don't know if I'll ever be able to finish this.

Why is it so damn hard for me to continue reading this book?

I like Rick's story a lot better than Luke's so far.

Do not waste your time! This author was in need of an editor

I'm further along on the book, I just entered the third part. Part 2 was really hard to get through, I felt like a lot of part two was just redundant; some of the paragraphs said the same thing two or three ways just in different ways...which really dragged it out. I'm interested to see how part three plays out.

The fact that this is the first book this author had written made me a little worried the book wouldn't be interesting or capture my attention. Even though I'm only 49 pages in so far it is a really good book.

This book was apparently published without first being edited or proofread.

Finished part 1. The writing goes up and down from bad to pretty good. It can get very melodramatic at times, very dry and lacking in originality at others. Still, there are parts that flow quite well.