Status Updates From Sailing to Sarantium

Brilliant intrigues invariably succeed. I can't yet prove a character individually too powerful or too good (though I have my candidates), but scheming always brings profit.

its fine so far but idk how much more i can take of GGK not being to write a single woman who isn't there just for a guy to have sex with. also the blasé attitude towards slavery is really side-eye inducing, it really drives me up the wall when ppl write stuff like this under the guise of "b-b-but it's historically accurate!" and act like that gives them carte blanche to be giddy and insensitive abt it

Promising an interesting plot, at least.

Unfavourably impressed with the prose quality from the start. It's not only adverbs; it's "actually" attached to multiple qualifications within a single paragraph! Needless words