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Shay
is on page 216 of 355
The point of view changes so quickly from paragraph to paragraph sometimes it's jarring to be bounced around from one characters head to the other so fast. I also feel like certain things are being rushed and brushed over. Maybe if the set up to the world was 50 pages shorter we could get more into the actions of the characters later on.
— Mar 21, 2020 10:03PM
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Shay
is on page 116 of 355
A lot of world building and set up so far. I don't hate it, it's just slow going. And I'm used to characters being more fleshed out by this point. But I'm not having an awful time and I'm curious as to where it's going.
— Mar 21, 2020 04:32PM
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