Status Updates From Dziedzictwo krwi

zbyt znajome, świat fantasy a ma w sobie mrok naszego.

wowowowo ale dobrze są wykreowani bohaterowie !!!

This plot twist is so boring and overdone I said 'bro' when I read it, if the FMC takes this guy at his word that would be insane. I can practically visualize how this will end. How can someone take such an interesting premise and period of time and make it grating and terrible?

In a never-before-seen plot twist they used the small sad child as a plot device to get the FMC to care about the revolution and introduced a second love interest for c o n f l i c t and d r a m a

It takes a special kind of writing talent to have your character realize how bad the world is 100 times, how bad impassivity is 500 times and the sudden desire to change it 1,000 times.