Status Updates From Gwyneth and the Thief

Promising start. We love some peril

This got so much better and more interesting. Good lines and sweet moments, and I warmed to the hero and other characters. Things were too unbelievable and far-fetched that it really took away from the story, but I love the happy ending for all the characters. I didn’t want it any other way. Best one I’ve read lately out of the recent ones.

11-24. Pg179. It feels good to finally make some real progress. I’ve warmed up to the story and the hero more. Still not crazy about the plot but it’s gotten better.

11-23. pg81. Don’t like the introduction of a slutty character just to create jealousy. I see where this is going. Why is this so boring? Idl the hero or plot or really anything about it. So far fetched and ridiculous. I really don’t wanna read this. It seems so thick too. Ughhh.

11-17. Pg63.

11-16. Pg58. The plot behind this is too far-fetched and unbelievable. It’s taking away from the story.