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Shannon
is 37% done
The writing is confusing, it is difficult to tell who is doing or saying whatever is happening. It takes me out of the story if I have to keep looking back and re-reading a sentence to try to figure it out. I don't mind looking up definitions of words if needed but I do not enjoy convoluted sentence structure .
— Apr 16, 2024 07:18AM
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