DNF @ 22%
- The dialogue is super cringey and unnatural. This is the main reason I stopped reading. Like, it’s bad.
- Kai is very unconvincing as a ruthless future enforcer. I feel like the author wanted to make him cruel but also likable, and as a result, tried way too hard and failed on both counts.
- There are SO. MANY. TYPOS.
— Mar 28, 2025 05:29PM
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