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Afraid I'm going to have to try this one again sometime later, because every story is striking me the wrong way and it can't q that bad.

This re read is turning out better than I remembered

Fun in many ways, but why do Modern YA authors always have to suffer their plots to be so totally pacifist!? Like teens can't handle some idea of violence?

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Still scattered with minor plot errors, only one fairly serious to the universe, and considerable digression here and there, but still readable.

Yep, full of irritating, though so far minor plot goofs. Not bothersome, much.

Plot has problems but forging on for now

Hmm. May have blown the plot, I'll have to consider

Sigh. After I got started I realized with slow horror that I didn't have a near future crime/mystery, but an attempt at a time travel story. Authors never seem to realize that they don't work (it's impossible not to catch yourself up in a paradox).
Well, other than that, it's not terrible, and short so I will finish it I think