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So far, it's a pretty good read. The world building is small but immediate. The title says there's going to be a mystical cat shelter, but right now there is just a cat shelter with some tendrils of mystic energy in the neighborhood. It's a good reminder that the fantastical elements of your story don't have to hit your readers in the face.

It's interesting to reread this as an adult. It's not at all how I remember it. Well, I guess parts of it are, but there's a lot MORE than I remember. I guess that is more accurate.

It definitely feels like fantasy...but sometimes I feel like it's trying to subtly convert me to Christianity. However, that's only because I know the Bible stories.