I read the prologue and chapter one. I found it hard to get into the beginning of the prologue, since there were many in-universe words, plus the dialog is very stylized with many words that sound like someone got their hands on a thesaurus.
By mid-way through the prologue I was hooked enough to keep going and want to learn more, but I’m still waiting to find out what the main conflict is, so not fully hooked.
— Oct 13, 2023 11:12PM
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