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Quote: “a story can’t be wrong”, she said. “Because a story can always change”

Page 101: “ though she had her usual red lipstick on, she wore pajamas: a yellow velour camisole and matching pants that clung to her hips and thighs and belled out around her feet. She looked soft and plush ,like a naughty Pikachu. Sanyu was horrified that such a cursed phrase had ever formed in his mind but… it was accurate”

When I tell you I CACKLED!!

I love this conversation between Lumu and Sanyu of masculinity and how the need for men to be seen as strong and hide their want for comfort is leaving them ultimately unfulfilled

There was a weird dialogue sequence about social media and how it is something that’s obsessive but idk I feel like that’s out of character, at least for Keaton! Also the writing is very much to the point, not a lot of fluff to make the characters and the story feel real

So far the story is okay but the writing is a bit weird... Keeping an open mind but it's driving me crazy that Koby keeps referring to Keaton as "sister". Also Keaton had a really odd inner dialogue after the death of Koby's foster brother (this isn't a spoiler btw).

Yes I am reading this again please ignore me thank youuuu LOL