Luly Reyes’s Reviews > Body and Soul Food > Status Update
Luly Reyes
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So far the story is okay but the writing is a bit weird... Keeping an open mind but it's driving me crazy that Koby keeps referring to Keaton as "sister". Also Keaton had a really odd inner dialogue after the death of Koby's foster brother (this isn't a spoiler btw).
— Jan 07, 2022 02:28PM
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Luly Reyes
is on page 200 of 336
There was a weird dialogue sequence about social media and how it is something that’s obsessive but idk I feel like that’s out of character, at least for Keaton! Also the writing is very much to the point, not a lot of fluff to make the characters and the story feel real
— Jan 08, 2022 08:19PM
