Chapter four ends with the perfectly fine sentence: "Alone in Orchard Farm, I sank into the Mount Holyoke chair and wondered where my next step would take me." Then, chapter five starts with: "It didn't take me long to figure out that it involved finding the toilet," and I don't know why that decision was made, but it is definitely a choice.
— Mar 29, 2025 06:44PM
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