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I just don't think I can read any more. but I'll leave here for a while and maybe my mood will change.

This is ridiculous. Three weeks in to her relationship and her parents are planning on her wedding? This author loves hyphens. Try a few commas instead.

I literally just rolled my eyes at this book. That's a first

Fewer mistakes in this book than the seven previously. Seems to end kind of abruptly

Lots of redundancies still needs a good editor

Editing has gotten a little better but it still needs help. I'm getting kind of tired of the book I hope the next one hand me back.

I really wish this book had a better editor

Needs some editing

I'm having a hard time finishing this. it jumps around all over the place I can't keep track of who is doing the talking.

way took much bouncing around between way too many characters. I'm sure it's all going to tie in at the end and maybe set ups for future book but come on let's go already

I really hope there is more to this than dominant billionaire meets shy innocent girl.

oh I really do like this book, but the author needs a better editor.