It has potential but something is missing. The H.wasn’t mean enough, the heroine wasn’t really shy.
The whole thing feels forced. Probably it’s intentional on author’s part. But I don’t feel very invested in the story. The H seemed endearing mostly because of Chewy. He was more rude then mean. The heroine wasn’t that sympathetic, not really wallflower either.
— Dec 08, 2020 12:02PM
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