a. new criticism unlocked: the writing/story quality fluctuates. it was hard to connect to the characters, and once the story really started at around 60 pages it got so good because we had that conflict, that struggle, that story. but now the tests are over and she's in the palace, everything is falling flat. the alchemist's names feel incredibly immature, and yet there's human skin hanging around?
b. ducky-ducky
— Apr 14, 2024 01:12PM
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