At 22%, I can see that this is very likely a good story (obviously, it's Beauty and The Beast which I live for) but it could use some serious editing. It's not unreadable, and I won't pretend my own writing is perfect, but when I'm reading my brain just snags on mistakes and it pulls me out just a bit. So far not bad at all, just the editing. I definitely want to learn more.
— Feb 06, 2026 06:07AM
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