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absurdly terrible, get me out of here

girlie loves using ellipses and periods excessively to substitute commas and do ‘mic drop’ moments - it’s just ugly lol also let’s not use an ellipses to represent stuttering please. she also loves starting sentences with the word “and” when it’s just as impactful without it. i’m convinced this was not put through an editor, considering this was released after 1 yr of the previous book.

feels like i’m reading a wattpad fanfiction (derogatory)

get. me. out. of. here.

wish this book knew how to show and not tell…or just not have the grandma explain everything conveniently for the reader to understand lol

Revelares do this, Revelares act like this…Okay, I get it. Also, the magic world building in this quite terrible. I get the Encanto one special magical family and whatnot but this system is even less clear than that.

MC is starting to get…insufferable