girlie loves using ellipses and periods excessively to substitute commas and do ‘mic drop’ moments - it’s just ugly lol also let’s not use an ellipses to represent stuttering please. she also loves starting sentences with the word “and” when it’s just as impactful without it. i’m convinced this was not put through an editor, considering this was released after 1 yr of the previous book.
— Dec 10, 2025 12:59PM
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