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Also it seems like I missed it in my previous reads, but there's no homophobia, internalized or otheriwse. like genuinely. its soooooooooooo nice

Ba Nana (Guava) is fucking funny. the gap moe

If Ba Nana (Guava) hadn't been explicitly stated to be underage (well, in ch 6, he's 'legal' now), this guy would lowkey be a love interest to Ling Meng. Regardless, he's just a fanboy and it's fucking funny

I'm really trying but why is Hector sometimes such a pussy, sometimes such a 'I'm a badass' edgy teenager. The whiplash I get from him makes me cringe so hard I literally am unable to read anymore

Damn, what the fuck

It's taken me this long to finally start to remember who's who (apart from Demane and Captain, for obvious reasons), and it's way over halfway. The amount of named characters in this short book isn't really doing it any favors

Did they have sex or what lmfao. This prose makes me confused in like a good way, cause I love it, but also, there's moment where it just makes me ???

"But Demane had by now learned to recognize cover for a clinch, a pretext to grab two handfuls of ass." damn bro, that actually made me laugh

Clary pmo

Unlike the woke kids(TM) nowadays, I don't really gaf about fictional taboo couples (it's fictional, it's a bunch of words on screen). But imo the way Clare handled the incest thing between Jace and Clary here is so fucking weeeeeeeeeeeeeird. Like you would think Jace would be more put off but nah. Like mfker youre putting ME off here. ME who ships the weirdest fucking shit

FWQ is already possessive hmmmmhmmmmm

"Pretty, even." Hmmm, okay, Elza. Maybe you're like your brother and are into 'monsters' idk

You know, I would get all pissy at the fact that Niko didn't do *it*. But honestly, I kinda get it. It's way more painful for that person this way LMAO

I really love books that don't piss around and quickly gets to the point. imo it's why I like Holly Black's books

This is the most I've read in a while, but damn, this is getting good

"How different was [Salem] from me?" The difference between you and Salem is that he isn't crying and gagging like a little bitch about whether to kill.

I'm really trying to read more into this book lmfao. but holy fuck, Hector's character is very conflicted and not in a good way imo. I feel like Alderson was going for a 'snarky killer with morality', but it just isn't working for meeeeeee. Like WDYM YOU WON'T KILL THE PERSON SUFFERING BEFORE YOU?? WHAT DO YOU MEAAAAAAAN????

I'm really not trying to be negative (cause I want to like this book) but I'm naturally snarky, and I just have to say that this entire fucking battle sequence is like disney-levels of goofy, with cheesy as hell dialogue

"I didn't plan to harm another witch unless provoked". Aren't you supposed to be a bloodthirsty 'killer'?

Ngl, for someone filled with 'vengeance', I feel as though Hector is a bit too nice. Like yeah, I get Romy's nice and all, and she did give you a chance to run away, but imo, their friendship came way too fast.

One superficial comment I want to add. Can I just say how none of the names in this book match the vibe of their character? Idk maybe I'm just biased. This part, I'm aware, is purely on my end, not exactly a true 'criticism'

I'm just waiting for Romy's betrayal

Brother, didn't Caym literally just tell you he wouldn't be able to help you lmfao

"Step forwards"

Okay, so "I replied to our bond, my finality wavering". Hector CAN speak to Caym in his mind??? So, why was he whispering earlier? Seems kinda pointless and a bit sus (for everyone) when he can just literally just say it in his head?

Weird grammar, "The air beyond Jonathan's back rippled like water was caught between the archways instead of empty space". Like huh???