L.M. Archer > Recent Status Updates

I'm enjoying it. Not sure why she's staying in the house. Not like she's hard up for money or sank or savings into it. I get it's a family heirloom but she could, you know, live somewhere else and hire someone to secure it.

Also, a bit of a strange coincidence about her great grandmother. I mean what are the odds

Mark my words, something is gonna happen with that damn cliff.

I'm gonna shelve this book for a bit. The writing style is very amateur. I thought I could handle it because the plot was good but now, nothing ha happened in the last 10% which is a lot for a almost 400 page book. I may finish it another time.

This book is fucking W I L D. Like. I'm 42% in and I feel like I've already read an entire book. The plot took a left turn and a bitch is INVESTED.

I don't know what's going to happen the rest of this book since they already love each other? Again, I find myself pondering DNFing but.... I also feel slightly invested. The writing just feels so teenagerish. And they aren't teens. They're adults. In college. So maybe it kind of works but... Idk. Just feels immature.

Unsure. Some typos. Kind of feels like I'm reading fanfic that was written by a teenager. Not saying that negatively. Just that the writing is a bit immature for my taste. Lots of narration. Lots of telling instead of showing. Thought about DNFing but I like the premise so I'm gonna try to power through.

I just.... I don't buy it.