I’m still enjoying this one, but I have to admit it’s been edited really poorly. I’m not sure I’ve ever seen so many grammatical mistakes and missing words in a fully published book before, and there are lots of little inconsistencies that haven’t been corrected (e.g. in the chapter I’ve just finished, Eirene dropped something, didn’t pick it back up, and then a few paragraphs later dropped it again!)
— Apr 21, 2026 07:57AM
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