this magic system is written to fit the story and world. rather than the world being written within the constraints of a defined magic system.
as the reader, it makes me feel very discombobulated because there’s some new rule or exception with the magic that’s known or some entirely new magic. and all of this is existing in a world that “doesn’t” know about magic? it’s just not believable
— Oct 28, 2025 11:58AM
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