The back and forth, will they won't, won't they, about the marriage is a little overdone. Unless something happens to physically prevent it, I've no doubt they'll be married. But there are nice moments of character work in the first few chapters.
And for kicks, I'll keep track of all mentions of Whit's bigly tallness. As of the prologue and first two chapters, we've got 6. Two in chapter 1 and four in chapter 2.
— Sep 13, 2025 03:00PM
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