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55% in and it's late me the author completely forgot about the first sex scene with Bain. The first thing he did was go down on her.

Book 3. "Oh gods, this was happening. I'd fantasized about it but never had it happen."
WTF! This is completely frustrating and something a re-read would have caught. This is like an extremely rough draft of a story

I may come back and finish because the story is interesting, however the FMC is extremely annoying. She acts like a spoiled toddler.

Left off at almost 5 hours originally, so trying again

Stopped reading. May try again later. Good story, I'm just not into it right now