Tina’s Reviews > Dawning Wings > Status Update
Tina
is 53% done
55% in and it's late me the author completely forgot about the first sex scene with Bain. The first thing he did was go down on her.
Book 3. "Oh gods, this was happening. I'd fantasized about it but never had it happen."
WTF! This is completely frustrating and something a re-read would have caught. This is like an extremely rough draft of a story
— Aug 10, 2021 07:17PM
Book 3. "Oh gods, this was happening. I'd fantasized about it but never had it happen."
WTF! This is completely frustrating and something a re-read would have caught. This is like an extremely rough draft of a story
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