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The dialogue is consistently just the main character repeating whatever sentence she just heard.
“It’s not entirely clear.” “Not entirely clear?”
“Yes, she’s totally cleared.” “Cleared.”
“I was under another impression… about your finances…” “Another impression.”
“…Can I ask where you got the money?” “Money?”
This was only two pages worth of this dialogue 😵‍💫

booooooo tomato tomato

The phrase “I want you more” has popped up at the bare minimum eleven times in the 59 pages I’ve read. Debating if this book was meant to target a much younger demographic than I or AI helped write some of this story. Either way I’m committed to finishing this book, even if it’s painful

Wow I do not like this style of writing but I will persevere