I keep finding myself editing the book. Changing words around. There is so much fluff, unnecessary words, actions that could be simplified, and lots of repetition. Also, I'm having an issue with the paragraph spacing. Some are double space, to me that signifies a shift in the story or gap in time but that's not how the book is written. I am still reading though.
— Feb 10, 2013 07:50AM
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