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Timmi is 68% done with This Girl (Slammed, #3)
Colleen Hoover really can do no wrong.
May 10, 2013 08:24PM Add a comment
This Girl (Slammed, #3)

Timmi
Timmi is 27% done with Find You in the Dark (Find You in the Dark, #1)
Well written, angst filled. I like the characters and they seem to develop nicely! Kiddos to A Meredith Walters yet again. I loved Bad Rep :)
Feb 11, 2013 09:45PM Add a comment
Find You in the Dark (Find You in the Dark, #1)

Timmi
Timmi is 14% done with Rocked Under (Rocked, #1)
I keep finding myself editing the book. Changing words around. There is so much fluff, unnecessary words, actions that could be simplified, and lots of repetition. Also, I'm having an issue with the paragraph spacing. Some are double space, to me that signifies a shift in the story or gap in time but that's not how the book is written. I am still reading though.
Feb 10, 2013 07:50AM Add a comment
Rocked Under (Rocked, #1)

Timmi
Timmi is 10% done with Rocked Under (Rocked, #1)
The writing isn't great, still reading on in hopes but the author is in serious need of a thesaurus. I just read the word had 6xs on one iPhone kindle app page. Though I am still not sure of the tense of the story.
Feb 09, 2013 07:06PM Add a comment
Rocked Under (Rocked, #1)

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