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Timmi
is 10% done
The writing isn't great, still reading on in hopes but the author is in serious need of a thesaurus. I just read the word had 6xs on one iPhone kindle app page. Though I am still not sure of the tense of the story.
— Feb 09, 2013 07:06PM
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Timmi
is 14% done
I keep finding myself editing the book. Changing words around. There is so much fluff, unnecessary words, actions that could be simplified, and lots of repetition. Also, I'm having an issue with the paragraph spacing. Some are double space, to me that signifies a shift in the story or gap in time but that's not how the book is written. I am still reading though.
— Feb 10, 2013 07:50AM
