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This is upsetting. And unkind.

Well, that's awkward!

Super disrespectful to kiss a lover in front of your fiancé. But, the attraction to the commander makes sense now because this is a polycule.

Now he's attracted to the commander? Seriously, author! If you are writing a romance, concentrate on the attraction being between the main characters.

Do not include sex with other people outside the main romance!

It's so disturbing! And unnecessary.

I always consider it a yellow flag when someone says "it usually annoys me when… "

Yeah, right now their actions don't annoy you, but if you get into a relationship with them, you will be annoyed by them in the future!

No discussion of protection? This might have been a better short story than a whole book.

If you're gonna use this premise, you shouldn't have the pivotal conversation happen before the book starts

This book doesn't feel like a progression of the same characters. It feels like caricature.

This dog interaction is the best thing in this book so far and might even save this book from itself.

I'm not sure if this is a total personality transplant for Diem. He's acting a lot differently in this book.

Aw, Diem... you actually were able to say you needed a sec to process!

Progress.

I'm so puzzled how Diem affords his life.

Why you writing this 56-year old like an old lady!?

Diem's self hatred makes me sad and it's time for him to start seeing something different in the mirror.

I hate how much the beginning revolves around "oh, he's so hot".

I don't know why I decided to check this book out, but I did! I am not much for Daddy kink. Let's see how it goes.

Did she really say "I'm sorry" after hearing that the jackoff that ran her off the road was also hurt!? Ridiculous.

It irritates me how much this book is about sex. She got socked good in the face by his dad and they immediately have sex after declaring their "love" and then the whole pack has sex as soon as they get home. Taking care of her after she got hit should be about more than this.

Makes no sense to threaten him with potential prosecution rather than reporting him to the cops now. 🙄

She keeps referencing "the accident" but it's not clear whether they know what happened.

I prefer a heroine with at least some political savvy.

She's been celibate. But how about him? Why isn't he saying anything?

I had a feeling there'd be consequences to that lack of contraception.

She can't wait if you don't ask!!!!

Also, I never want my heroines to give a BJ first. I always want the hero to be generous and start things off. But 🤷‍♀️

How are they not discussing safe sex?

I HATE that he left her alone. It drives me crazy that she has to be brave while he gets to hear her tell everyone how great he is.

Take a star off for that.

I hate when everyone's lying to each other to "protect them".

🙄

Ugh. I hate the "keep the truth from my loved ones" crap. If you're in danger, your dad should know!