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“Where is your son?”

"Um. At his desk,” Frey said breathlessly.

"Will he be traumatized if he sees me kissing you?” Renato murmured.

Frey swallowed heavily. “No. But he might traumatize you by planning our wedding.”

“I like the idea of Milan in the spring,” Renato said...

Poor single dad but also 🤣🤣🤣

Freys behavior has been childish.

But also... talk about sexual harassment. Don't make him be all morally superior and then do this. 🙄

I love enemies to lovers but hate petty and mean behavior. I hope this is better than doing stupid pranks.

Don't be dumb. It's never too late to ask rather than tell. 🙄

Agreeing to a double date without talking to your partner is bizarre. Let alone that y'all aren't boyfriends.

I don't get the constant sex talk. Why is everyone talking about sex all the time?

They have had NO meaningful conversations at this point. I wish there were more to this than physical attraction.

That is horrifying!

How can I deal with it in this book!? I'm usually it one for instalust but these poor guys!

No one cancels on a personal trainer without telling them. Or reschedules them without them being a part of it.

Also, these dudes are so horny!

If this isn't a main character, it's such a weird convo.

I'm usually not one for insta-lust but this is really funny.

This is upsetting. And unkind.

Well, that's awkward!

Super disrespectful to kiss a lover in front of your fiancé. But, the attraction to the commander makes sense now because this is a polycule.

Now he's attracted to the commander? Seriously, author! If you are writing a romance, concentrate on the attraction being between the main characters.

Do not include sex with other people outside the main romance!

It's so disturbing! And unnecessary.

I always consider it a yellow flag when someone says "it usually annoys me when… "

Yeah, right now their actions don't annoy you, but if you get into a relationship with them, you will be annoyed by them in the future!

No discussion of protection? This might have been a better short story than a whole book.

If you're gonna use this premise, you shouldn't have the pivotal conversation happen before the book starts

This book doesn't feel like a progression of the same characters. It feels like caricature.

This dog interaction is the best thing in this book so far and might even save this book from itself.

I'm not sure if this is a total personality transplant for Diem. He's acting a lot differently in this book.

Aw, Diem... you actually were able to say you needed a sec to process!

Progress.

I'm so puzzled how Diem affords his life.

Why you writing this 56-year old like an old lady!?

Diem's self hatred makes me sad and it's time for him to start seeing something different in the mirror.

I hate how much the beginning revolves around "oh, he's so hot".

I don't know why I decided to check this book out, but I did! I am not much for Daddy kink. Let's see how it goes.