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P.400
The plot is a hot mess

P.286
So many different things happen, they almost seem random and not connected. The plot is an exhausting mess of tropes and 99 different issues, that are all solved in 2 pages each.

P.186
This is Not Enemies to lovers or a slowburn. It is an exhausting on-off relationship. They go back and Forth between hatred, sudden softness to the MMC randomly telling the FMC, that she is his favorite part of the day. No build up, no tension. From the moment they meet, it is back and forth. Due to the lack of tension, yearning or slow build up, the relationship seems weird and not understandable.

P. 132
Everything Happens so fast, Everest issue is solved in 2 pages. FMC is horrible, she is rude, entitled and exhausting. As soon as the MMC Matches her attitude, she is hurt and crying.

Why are they living in their motorhomes? And why would they Share?

As soon as the Wedding Happens, I knew the Guardian was actually the Brown prince.

A Little later I also Guessed that He Gas the Same Sikness as the Monsters