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Finally!!!

You’re here to fuck up my life, aren’t you?I wanted to say, but instead continued talking like we were old mates. Though, the way she was looking at me wasn’t how mates would look at each other.She was definitely here to fuck up my life, because I knew, just knew she still wanted me.

I didn’t reply to his question, conflicted, scared, and so in love I knew if I didn’t die now he would break my heart like Ant broke my will.

“I remember the first time I saw Axl in a video,” he said, lighting up. “Here’s this guy with red hair like me, skinny too, even looked a little bit like me, and I was mesmerised. I wanted to be him, so I begged my mam continuously to let me grow my hair long. She tried to cut it, but every time I’d scream and run around the house...”

I saw the last part as though it was a dream.
Heard my brother’s cries.
Heard his screams.
A few days after I was released from hospital, I ran out onto a busy road, wanting to be hit by a car. No one hit me. But it was the first time I’d ever considered committing suicide—and it wouldn’t be the last.
(This is heartbreaking!)

Dante shook his head vigorously. My stepdad moved forward, making Dante back up fast, fear colouring his dark eyes. (I hate Chaz soooo much. Gah, why can't he just die!)

Poor L :(

Jenna trying to learn how to have sex by watching one of her brothers' porn videos, one called Virginal Vicky was hilarious!

I was nothing to look at: too skinny, too pale, with freckles and orange hair that could blind you. I turned my face from side to side, not seeing anything that could be remotely hot. All I saw was me, a person who was both male and female, stuck in a world that only allowed me to be one or the other.

I missed these boys.

Ugh, didn't like that bit, hoping the following bits get better. Bring on the men! No more solo acts please.

I don't like the word juices, it puts me off.

I gasped and whipped my hand back. I had a penis! (That scene made me laugh out loud :D)

Embarrassed I'd been caught staring, I went to look away, but stopped as he flicked his tongue out, the motion capturing my full attention. He ran it over his lip ring provocatively, the glint in his eyes more devilish than angelic. (Me likey Christopher!)

Not well written, no story, but still hitting the spot, so I'm happy. In the mood, baby! Yeah, it's that kind of read ;D

The editing isn't very good in this book, but I'll give it more of a chance since it was free.