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Bwahahahaha!!! "I look like the Khaleesi!"

More eye rolling... Why does everyone Evie know sound like a therapist. I mean, everyone who gives her advice sounds like a Dear Abby advice columnist. It's a bit unrealistic. What happened to "Life's hard. buy a helmet" (Boy Meets World). And... Evie just HAPPENS to be friends with a sexual abuse victim. Hmm...

"Looking at the past can be painful, but you can either run from it, numb it, or learn from it." ~Uh... sounds like Rafiki just popped over from the Lion King movie. Rolling my eyes here~

A little ticked off right now...finally we have a major reveal and where there should be an oh my God, eye to eye moment, he flips her and bangs hers from the back like it's a regular day. IT'S NOT!! Make me feel the emotion, damnit!

Almost 3/4 done and we still know absolutely nothing about him

Almost 3/4 done and we still know absolutely nothing about him

I wish I liked this but I roll my eyes in almost every chapter. It bugs me how Evie just agrees to everything Jake wants. I realize girls jump into bed with men they don't know all the time but in my book world I'd like to see them have to work for it. Just because he says the right words now doesn't mean he won't break you later. Pessimistic...Two dates and a bedroom romp and you still don't really know him?!?

So...Kylie's writing has definitely evolved. I'm not wanting to gag myself There are still a few areas where the dialog is over the top or unnecessary. “Thank you for being so understanding and compassionate about everything. There’s more though...” It just doesn't flow. I'm glad to see Kylie has grown, though

This one's even worse than the last. Damn my curiosity for how it ends. I hate the writing style and the way she describes the sex scenes as making love when they sound like they were taken straight out of stories from Literotica. That's not loving...that's f*cking. And Derek CRIES over her more than once?!?! They've had three dates and two sleepovers. Hardly long enough for a man to cry over anyone. Be Realistic!!

Still struggling to finish. So much of it feels forced and awkward. The overuse of swear words (and in inappropriate places) is distracting.

Struggling here.... I feel like I have to finish this because I payed for it but this thing just keeps dragging. I keep looking at my progress just to find out I'm still not even halfway through...and it's a SERIES?!?!?!?!?

Just started Part 5... Holding my breath, expecting something bad to happen with every new chapter.

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