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prologue got me hooked…claire, on the other hand, is someone i don’t think i’d be friends with lol
a little too self-appraising? self-congratulating? self-centered? for my tastes

i was, however, genuinely sad over Terry’s death.

def invested now

i’m actually kinda into this now lol idk what happened between the first three chapters and the rest of the book but we’ve definitely improved

oof not much better in the show don’t tell department than the last one

this is killing me
WHY DOES SHE ASK SO MANY QUESTIONS??? THIS WHOLE BOOK IS JUST HER INNER THOUGHTS. NOTHING IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING.
i think im more mad bc this could’ve been a good book. it has good bones. now it’s been RUINED

the owlcrate note the author wrote said this was basically a slightly edited first draft. AND YOU CAN TELL

i feel like we should have started when Abuela died not after we got to california….also what happened to show don’t tell lol

why do they keep saying demon turds