Julia’s Reviews > Salvación > Status Update

this is killing me
WHY DOES SHE ASK SO MANY QUESTIONS??? THIS WHOLE BOOK IS JUST HER INNER THOUGHTS. NOTHING IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING.
i think im more mad bc this could’ve been a good book. it has good bones. now it’s been RUINED

the owlcrate note the author wrote said this was basically a slightly edited first draft. AND YOU CAN TELL

i feel like we should have started when Abuela died not after we got to california….also what happened to show don’t tell lol