Hmmm I admit I don’t love this as much as I wanted to. It feels like a lot of telling and very little experiencing the moment.
I also feel like I already know how the rest of the story will unfold.
Maybe if I loved the MC more I wouldn’t mind that but she is pretty one dimensional. She’s so kind and ordinary even when she plots murder she feels rather ordinary.
— Jun 10, 2026 08:43PM
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