I truly am curious to continue this story, though the writing style seems a bit too amateur for my liking. For example, the fact that Monique had to wait 30 mins for Evelyn to start telling her story, just to be escorted out of her home as 'it was getting late' is just poor writing and can't be excused by how unconfortable the question was, since she had previously dodged some inconvenient questions with dexterity .
— Sep 08, 2024 02:46AM
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