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Small grievances I have with the writing:
- Using "same" in the dialogue. I didn't notice it until I read a review and now I have.
- Using men's jaws ticking or clenching as one of few ways to describe that they are mad or tense. Again, I didn't notice it until someone pointed it out but now I can't not notice it.
- Using periods after every word in a dialogue to display frustration (even spelling it out once?)

Loving it so far, can't stop reading

dnf

OMG MIA JUST LET MATEO KILL VINCE. I KNOW IT'S NOT GONNA HAPPEN BUT HOLY, IM SO ANNOYED AT MIA.

I have to believe Mia is genuinely stupid to not understand that the reason why Mateo doesn't seem happy about the pregnancy is because it might be Vince's. Like, she might actually be this dense, wow...

Getting bored... and Mia continuing to be annoying asf.

Mia is officially annoying me. Why the fuck is she so horny for EVERYONE. I cannot. Like, it's actually annoying. Getting jealous over a girl that's flirting with Vince. I honestly don't care what happens to her at this point.

“I wanna fucking kill everyone and see their fucking insides and fucking fuck Glyndon”

That dialogue is pretty much all that the MMC has ever said throughout this whole book :)

?????? I hate how immature the writing is but still reading.

Many cringy lines…