Good so far. Don't see the majority of plot twists coming. I don't see the point of all the time hopping forward. You'll end a chapter with something interesting happening to the characters and the next chapter will be days to a week later... perhaps it makes it more real life like but I find it's unnecessary for a book. I've totally lost track of how much time has gone by for the characters in the story...
— Aug 02, 2025 05:34AM
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