So far so good through chapter 11.
But a newborn isn't going to coo and follow people.. smile because of gas. how many days have gone by. It may be three?
A newborn shouldn't be around that many people at first.
Five suitcases of cloths came from where? Tinkie wouldn't leave Libby to go shopping. Overnight shipping?
Some little things that are bothering me so far.
— Nov 15, 2016 07:34PM
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